Pablo Neruda - Oda Federicu Garcia Lorci (UPOMOOC!)

PraGlodavac Broj postova: 815 Age: 18 Registration date: 18.09.2007

imas li vremena do sutra da nesto uradimo. u ponedjeljak moram predati. hajd molim te ako ikako mozes... :S

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You won't cry for my absence, I know... You forgot me long ago. Am I that unimportant? Am I so insignificant? Isn't something missing? Isn't someone missing me?
...I breathe deep and cry out... and if I breathe, I'll bleed knowing you don't care. And if I sleep just to dream of you,
I'll wake without you there... I'm all alone... Isn't something missing me? Isn't someone missing me?...

Ajme

Pokušat ću sutra. Ali mi je teško kad nemam nikakav uzorak kako to radite u školi. Pomažem ponekad svojim dečkima, ali onio su još u osnovnoj i uvijek u školi naprave jednu pjesmu, za doma im daju drugu. Imaš li ti kakav uzorak u smislu što profesor od tebe očekuje?

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PraGlodavac Broj postova: 815 Age: 18 Registration date: 18.09.2007

prvo objasnimo uopceno o pjesmi, znacenje
karakteristike glavne: koliko strofa, stihova etc
onda rima, ritam, pjesnicke slike,
kako neruda vidi lorcu u pjesmi?
svoje misljenej o pjesmi
tako odprilike..

ne mora biti toliko perfektno
treba mi samo kljucno, a ostalo mogu i sam. bitno mi je samo da me usmjeris, nesto cu vec napisat

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You won't cry for my absence, I know... You forgot me long ago. Am I that unimportant? Am I so insignificant? Isn't something missing? Isn't someone missing me?
...I breathe deep and cry out... and if I breathe, I'll bleed knowing you don't care. And if I sleep just to dream of you,
I'll wake without you there... I'm all alone... Isn't something missing me? Isn't someone missing me?...

Poslala sam ti malo ideja na pp

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PraGlodavac Broj postova: 815 Age: 18 Registration date: 18.09.2007

Hvala puno!
stvarno si mi pomogla, ne znam kako da ti se oduzim.

*~THX~*

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You won't cry for my absence, I know... You forgot me long ago. Am I that unimportant? Am I so insignificant? Isn't something missing? Isn't someone missing me?
...I breathe deep and cry out... and if I breathe, I'll bleed knowing you don't care. And if I sleep just to dream of you,
I'll wake without you there... I'm all alone... Isn't something missing me? Isn't someone missing me?...

ThE_EMORTAL je napisao/la:

Hvala puno!
stvarno si mi pomogla, ne znam kako da ti se oduzim.

*~THX~*

Nema na čemu hug

Samo neka bude od koristi zubi

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PraGlodavac Broj postova: 815 Age: 18 Registration date: 18.09.2007

ma super je
vec sam nesto napravio. samo malo jos uredit i bice perfect ^^

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You won't cry for my absence, I know... You forgot me long ago. Am I that unimportant? Am I so insignificant? Isn't something missing? Isn't someone missing me?
...I breathe deep and cry out... and if I breathe, I'll bleed knowing you don't care. And if I sleep just to dream of you,
I'll wake without you there... I'm all alone... Isn't something missing me? Isn't someone missing me?...